Lets say you've got a charachter who was once quite a loser but has turned his life around and become a huge success.
The charachter has issues about his past which he has chose to sweep under the carpet to his subconscious. The problems swept under the carpet have now caused great damage to the charachter, rendering him once again --a loser.
The charachter is too full of pride to consider these problems though, it's as if he is living blind.
Would you choose to slowly reveal the charachter's hidden issues without stating them or blatantly show them, so the reader knows his problem right off the bat?
The charachter has issues about his past which he has chose to sweep under the carpet to his subconscious. The problems swept under the carpet have now caused great damage to the charachter, rendering him once again --a loser.
The charachter is too full of pride to consider these problems though, it's as if he is living blind.
Would you choose to slowly reveal the charachter's hidden issues without stating them or blatantly show them, so the reader knows his problem right off the bat?
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