In efforts to clear my head between two major characters, I have found some confrontation is always good for the soul. Here's two individuals who had the 'Hot's' for each other, and discovering something deeper flows in one... so much in fact it begins to effect them both.
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ERNIE
Actin' like what? How am I
suppose to act! S'cuse me
for not knowing what to do
when you'd being sold out
by own people!
RACHEL
I didn't know.
She and Ernie lock eyes, with the desk between them.
High noon. He wants to take his anger out on her.
ERNIE
I don't need this right now, okay!
Do whatever you have to do, just
close the deal. For once, Rachel
forget about your damn party!
Rachel gives him a look, more disappointed than angry.
RACHEL
Alright, if that's how you feel --
She gathers her bag, and turns to charge out.
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Open for any suggestions on the above statement, if it works or not!?
///////////////////////
ERNIE
Actin' like what? How am I
suppose to act! S'cuse me
for not knowing what to do
when you'd being sold out
by own people!
RACHEL
I didn't know.
She and Ernie lock eyes, with the desk between them.
High noon. He wants to take his anger out on her.
ERNIE
I don't need this right now, okay!
Do whatever you have to do, just
close the deal. For once, Rachel
forget about your damn party!
Rachel gives him a look, more disappointed than angry.
RACHEL
Alright, if that's how you feel --
She gathers her bag, and turns to charge out.
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Open for any suggestions on the above statement, if it works or not!?
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