ZEP
(cutting him off) His name is John,
Dr. Gordon. (He looks down at the patient,
who we see is a man in his late forties-early
fifties, hairless except for a small
white goatee. His head is to the side
and he is sleeping. On the tray table
in front of him is a notebook and some
colored pencils. As Zep looks at him
and speaks of him, there is caring in
his voice, something Dr. Gordon has
yet to display regarding this patient.)
He's a very interesting person.
Why is the parenthetical so long?
And this is from a prodcued film screenplay!!! Holy cow, talk about breaking rules. What rules? Maybe it's just okay to write anyway you want. Hmmm... I'm going back to my re-write...
(cutting him off) His name is John,
Dr. Gordon. (He looks down at the patient,
who we see is a man in his late forties-early
fifties, hairless except for a small
white goatee. His head is to the side
and he is sleeping. On the tray table
in front of him is a notebook and some
colored pencils. As Zep looks at him
and speaks of him, there is caring in
his voice, something Dr. Gordon has
yet to display regarding this patient.)
He's a very interesting person.
Why is the parenthetical so long?
And this is from a prodcued film screenplay!!! Holy cow, talk about breaking rules. What rules? Maybe it's just okay to write anyway you want. Hmmm... I'm going back to my re-write...
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