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  • I need another word/pharse to describe this...

    My main character is wrestling with her conscience over the person she is/used to be (she's transforming and doesn't know it). She's in the midst of talking to somebody and she's trying to describe what she's going through. She says that something is f*ckin' with her but I want another word or term.

    You guys are good at this. Any suggestions?

    Thanks.

  • #2
    Re: I need another word/pharse to describe this...

    Screwing.

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    • #3
      Re: I need another word/pharse to describe this...

      Thanks, suzea.

      Frank, Ima' steal one of those. You're good at this. You should be a writer.

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      • #4
        Re: I need another word/pharse to describe this...

        Frankie, dude, I used two of those and they conveyed EXACTLY what the character needed to say.

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