I need a short, articulate, playful line that captures that same thought (literally, this is a physical race between two people) in a more "literary" sort of way. A new script of mine features folks from a different age, and they speak in elevated language. I'm having a lot of fun with it and I think I'm actually doing a pretty good job, but this line has be stumped.
Pursue me if you can?
Follow at your peril?
At thy risk and peril?
Not crazy about any of these. Suggestions welcome!
Pursue me if you can?
Follow at your peril?
At thy risk and peril?
Not crazy about any of these. Suggestions welcome!
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