the actor who can speak volumes with a facial expression alone. when this happens, we notice.
so you're writing a scene. and you want the character to speak volumes with a facial expression alone. and so you write it as such.
and then you give your script to friends and post it on done deal. and the feedback is: make the charcter do something. give him an action as opposed to "John gives Sara a look that burns right through her." or "John gives Sara a menacing look"
so you're writing a scene. and you want the character to speak volumes with a facial expression alone. and so you write it as such.
and then you give your script to friends and post it on done deal. and the feedback is: make the charcter do something. give him an action as opposed to "John gives Sara a look that burns right through her." or "John gives Sara a menacing look"
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