Sorry to create a whole thread for this but maybe it will turn into a good discussion or help someone else. Should you ever state a character's thoughts outloud? Is it ever good to do this?
Such as...
Chris doesn't respond. He realizes that he shouldn't be ****ing with this guy.
or
Susie walks away mad. She realizes John is a douchebag.
Such as...
Chris doesn't respond. He realizes that he shouldn't be ****ing with this guy.
or
Susie walks away mad. She realizes John is a douchebag.
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