I have some characters traveling on a long plane ride across the Pacific. For various reasons, I would like to keep the plane in the story as opposed to just have the characters appear in Asia without showing how they got there.
Can I get some suggestions on how to break up the dialog between the characters (who are stuck in their seats) so that the page doesn't look like it's one large block of dialog? I'm finding the "show, don't tell" dictum a challenge in this confined space.
LIFEBOAT is on my "get script" list so that I can see how that's written but would still appreciate any suggestions. Thanks.
Can I get some suggestions on how to break up the dialog between the characters (who are stuck in their seats) so that the page doesn't look like it's one large block of dialog? I'm finding the "show, don't tell" dictum a challenge in this confined space.
LIFEBOAT is on my "get script" list so that I can see how that's written but would still appreciate any suggestions. Thanks.
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