I introduce the character as Jim's SISTER KIM. In the next scene she's in, I obviously don't write Jim's sister Kim and do so in every other scene she's in right?
Do I just write Jim and Kim sit in a diner. Or can I sometimes write Jim and his sister.
Is there a rule, does it depend if Jim is in the scene. Do I'll alternate to so it doesn't get repetitive for the reader?
Do I just write Jim and Kim sit in a diner. Or can I sometimes write Jim and his sister.
Is there a rule, does it depend if Jim is in the scene. Do I'll alternate to so it doesn't get repetitive for the reader?
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