So, I decided to write a TV pilot and I'm about 90% finished with the episode and did a read through and realized that my main character (in a 6 character story), the one who drives the motivation for the plot does about 70% of the speaking. I'm going to do a rewrite and try to do more with less in terms of dialogue but I don't really see how I can set the stage without expressing it in the main character's voice.
Here's my question. If this is read by a professional will this type of writing just be disregarded a the work of an amateur or, being that it's the first episode in a 10 year series is it acceptable for one character to do so much of the talking?
Thanks
Here's my question. If this is read by a professional will this type of writing just be disregarded a the work of an amateur or, being that it's the first episode in a 10 year series is it acceptable for one character to do so much of the talking?
Thanks
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