My script opens with a POV sequence and I am not sure how to title our voice when we eventually speak.
Under normal circumstances I would introduce my character to the reader and use his name above his dialogue but my entire plot hinges on subterfuge on my part and so names are out of the question.
I happily refer to 'we' and 'us' as the action takes places (take your screenwriting myths and shove 'em) but I find 'US' or 'OUR VOICE' incongruent. The best I can come up with is 'A MAN'S VOICE' and then, after the dialogue, point out that it's our voice.
Suggestions?
Under normal circumstances I would introduce my character to the reader and use his name above his dialogue but my entire plot hinges on subterfuge on my part and so names are out of the question.
I happily refer to 'we' and 'us' as the action takes places (take your screenwriting myths and shove 'em) but I find 'US' or 'OUR VOICE' incongruent. The best I can come up with is 'A MAN'S VOICE' and then, after the dialogue, point out that it's our voice.
Suggestions?
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