When writing pure action scenes in a spec script, what's the prevalent style? Do you write a play-by-play of the action, or write a line like, "Officer Jim gives chase in his patrol car," and leave a bunch of space for timing purposes, or write the one line and leave no extra space?
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Re: Writing Action Scenes
Write what happens, including all the exciting bits.
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Keep the descriptions short and punchy. Two or three short sentence bursts. Lots of white space on the page. Also, keep the voice active. (Jack jumps. Hits the wall four feet up. Flings himself over in one move.)
Make sure that you use only the barest amount of description needed to paint a clear picture in the reader's mind. Don't go prosey: "Jack leaps like a gazelle for the rough-hewn brick edifice. He catches hold of the wall like a giant spider, impossibly high off the ground. Using impressive, almost superhuman strength, Jack propels himself up and over the wall in a move that would make a gymnast green with envy." BLECH!!
To recap -- keep it short, active and essential.Jeffrey Alan Schechter
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If you are going to write a car chase scene, read Gone in 60 seconds or Ronin.
For fight scenes, is it important to show off certain Kung-Fu/Boxing skills?
The more streamline the action, the faster the pace, the quicker the read.
Charli
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Agree with Jeff. Short, succinct description of the action.
Don't go too broad where the reader can't picture anything in their head. But also don't get into too much depth as, especially with a kung-fu style fight, it will most likely change when the fight coordinator comes on set. Simply give us the highlights to keep us excited and the action moving.
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Originally posted by jschechterKeep the descriptions short and punchy. Two or three short sentence bursts. Lots of white space on the page. Also, keep the voice active. (Jack jumps. Hits the wall four feet up. Flings himself over in one move.)Quantum Mechanics is God's way of making sure we never really know what's going on.
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Read lots of scripts - you can start with Shane Black.
Action scenes are all of the exciting parts, none of the dull parts.
Also, remember that an action scene is still a character scene and a story scene - what are we learning about the character in this scene? How does it advance the story?
Here's a tip on action scenes:
http://www.scriptsecrets.net/tips/Tip324.htm
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The later the scene is in the script, the more you have to keep the action moving forward. If it's the climactic battle the script should be sprinting for the finish line. Make the reader flip through pages frantically until the climax and then slump down in his/her and take a deep breath."If at first you don't succeed, skydiving is not for you"
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