Re: Spontaneous Throwdown! "In the Belly of the Whale"
Sample 1: Dying is easy. Comedy is hard. Starts off well though. Feels like a skit more than anything else.
Sample 2: Not the strongest scene to open with. Predictable. Throw us in that last fifteen minutes and maybe you'd have something.
Sample 3: Best written of the three. Liked the descriptions. Characters could have sounded more distinct. Far from perfect, but I'd like to see where it goes.
Sample 1: Dying is easy. Comedy is hard. Starts off well though. Feels like a skit more than anything else.
Sample 2: Not the strongest scene to open with. Predictable. Throw us in that last fifteen minutes and maybe you'd have something.
Sample 3: Best written of the three. Liked the descriptions. Characters could have sounded more distinct. Far from perfect, but I'd like to see where it goes.
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