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    Title: Untitled Winsberg-Corson Project
    Logline: Centers on a peacock.

    Why didn't I think of that?

  • #2
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    Elevenbulls, You didn't finish the logline. The complete log is as follows:

    Logline: Centers on a Peacock. It does stuff.

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    • #3
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      *angrily scraps months worth of work*

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      • #4
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        No thanks. I don't watch NBC much anymore.
        "I ask every producer I meet if they need TV specs they say yeah. They all want a 40 inch display that's 1080p and 120Hz. So, I quit my job at the West Hollywood Best Buy."
        - Screenwriting Friend

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        • #5
          Re: Best - Logline - Ever

          Originally posted by omovie View Post
          Logline: Centers on a Peacock. It does stuff.
          You forgot the third act:


          Centers on a Peacock. It does stuff. Sorta.

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          • #6
            Re: Best - Logline - Ever

            Love the title!

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            • #7
              Re: Best - Logline - Ever

              I can already hear the trailer:

              "In a world where a Peacock does stuff kinda..."

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              • #8
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                In a world where stuff happens, one peacock must also do stuff. This time its personal.

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                • #9
                  Re: Best - Logline - Ever

                  In a world where birds are at the low end of society, one peacock must save his beak to spite his feathers.
                  "I ask every producer I meet if they need TV specs they say yeah. They all want a 40 inch display that's 1080p and 120Hz. So, I quit my job at the West Hollywood Best Buy."
                  - Screenwriting Friend

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                  • #10
                    Re: Best - Logline - Ever

                    Originally posted by omovie View Post
                    In a world where stuff happens, one peacock must also do stuff. This time its personal.
                    Okay, I actually laughed out loud at that. Good thing I'm alone at the moment.

                    "Your intuition knows what to write, so get out of the way.-
                    ― Ray Bradbury

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                    • #11
                      Re: Best - Logline - Ever

                      Originally posted by omovie View Post
                      In a world where stuff happens, one peacock must also do stuff. This time its personal.
                      Ah thanks, I just snorted jack daniels all over my monitor!
                      yes, it hurts...
                      My first crack at a logline usually makes a great synopsis!

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