I got a chance to read a quarter of this script last night. I have to say... it's confusing & not engaging... they think this is going to be the next Avatar???
ION by Will Dunn
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Originally posted by cupertinoCA View Posti haven't gotten that far yet. I know it's supposed to be a time/parallel universe travel story... but the beginning is written in such a convoluted way that it's hard to follow...
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I'm wondering if this is the script that was posted on Trigger/Zoe a while back. Seems very similar. But I can't remember what it was called. And whatever the script was called, it was removed from triggerstreet along with my review.It's the eye of the Tiger, it's the thrill of the fight
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Originally posted by Twofingeredtypist View PostI'm on page 19 and there are some questions of clarity, but I'm going to continue because it is intriguing and will probably pull together.
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I'm 30 pages in and you guys hit the nail on the head. While I'm glad this is a sold spec, I'm not seeing the entertainment value in it at all so far.
It's actually kinda funny in a way because it seems like it was written by that long-haired kid with the glasses that plays the jaded "sci-fi writer" on PARTY DOWN. lol
I'll say this much, the writer is great at painting a picture with his words. His writing let's me know EXACTLY "what" I'm "seeing" but the better question is why?
"Soldiering on" was the perfect way to describe this read, btw."U don' know me, muddafugga..."
- Al Pacino, Carlito's Way
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Originally posted by Jules View PostI'm wondering if this is the script that was posted on Trigger/Zoe a while back. Seems very similar. But I can't remember what it was called. And whatever the script was called, it was removed from triggerstreet along with my review.
lol!
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