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    I got a chance to read a quarter of this script last night. I have to say... it's confusing & not engaging... they think this is going to be the next Avatar???


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    i haven't gotten that far yet. I know it's supposed to be a time/parallel universe travel story... but the beginning is written in such a convoluted way that it's hard to follow...

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      The Time Traveler's Wife meets The Fountain?
      @TerranceMulloy

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        Originally posted by cupertinoCA View Post
        i haven't gotten that far yet. I know it's supposed to be a time/parallel universe travel story... but the beginning is written in such a convoluted way that it's hard to follow...
        Oddly enough, you've got me intrigued to the extent I may read it.
        @MacBullitt

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          Re: ION by Will Dunn

          Originally posted by Terrance Mulloy View Post
          The Time Traveler's Wife meets The Fountain?
          i haven't seen/read either, so i'm not sure. however, page 30 is as far as i can get. i just have no interest in it.

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            I'm wondering if this is the script that was posted on Trigger/Zoe a while back. Seems very similar. But I can't remember what it was called. And whatever the script was called, it was removed from triggerstreet along with my review.
            It's the eye of the Tiger, it's the thrill of the fight

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              I'm on page 19 and there are some questions of clarity, but I'm going to continue because it is intriguing and will probably pull together.
              @MacBullitt

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              • #8
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                Originally posted by Twofingeredtypist View Post
                I'm on page 19 and there are some questions of clarity, but I'm going to continue because it is intriguing and will probably pull together.
                please let us know once you've read the whole script id love to read a critique of the whole thing

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                  I'm soldiering on. Not there yet!
                  @MacBullitt

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                  • #10
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                    wow. soldiering on?? sounds like you're having a blast reading it

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                    • #11
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                      Now I'm totally intrigued!

                      Anyone who has a copy of this script, please send me a PM. I'd love to read it.

                      Late Night Writer

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                      • #12
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                        ya, here

                        http://www.mediafire.com/?ty3jmy2nnmn

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                          I'm 30 pages in and you guys hit the nail on the head. While I'm glad this is a sold spec, I'm not seeing the entertainment value in it at all so far.

                          It's actually kinda funny in a way because it seems like it was written by that long-haired kid with the glasses that plays the jaded "sci-fi writer" on PARTY DOWN. lol

                          I'll say this much, the writer is great at painting a picture with his words. His writing let's me know EXACTLY "what" I'm "seeing" but the better question is why?

                          "Soldiering on" was the perfect way to describe this read, btw.
                          "U don' know me, muddafugga..."
                          - Al Pacino, Carlito's Way

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                            Thanks, Cupertino!

                            When did this sell, by the way? I must have missed the notice in the trades. Who bought it?

                            Late Night Writer

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                              Originally posted by Jules View Post
                              I'm wondering if this is the script that was posted on Trigger/Zoe a while back. Seems very similar. But I can't remember what it was called. And whatever the script was called, it was removed from triggerstreet along with my review.
                              jules, you should remove that face!!!
                              lol!

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