Misplaced modifier. By saying Steve "gets to have", it implies that he is in a position to receive it; which sadly for the world at large, this is no longer the case. It's more appropriate to say Aaron gets to have it; or better still that Aaron will receive it, is in line for it, or is just one talented lucky guy.
Wow, was that pendantic or what? I've been doing too much editing lately!
life happens despite a few cracked pots- and random sunlight
the most ironic part of it all...SONY is making Steve Job's bio.
You would think it would be Disney since they have ties with the company he once owned, Pixar. However, excluding "The Help", Disney hasn't been interested in making serious adult-themed films for a while.
"A screenwriter is much like being a fire hydrant with a bunch of dogs lined up around it.- -Frank Miller
"A real writer doesn't just want to write; a real writer has to write." -Alan Moore
You would think it would be Disney since they have ties with the company he once owned, Pixar. However, excluding "The Help", Disney hasn't been interested in making serious adult-themed films for a while.
Misplaced modifier. By saying Steve "gets to have", it implies that he is in a position to receive it; which sadly for the world at large, this is no longer the case. It's more appropriate to say Aaron gets to have it; or better still that Aaron will receive it, is in line for it, or is just one talented lucky guy.
Wow, was that pendantic or what? I've been doing too much editing lately!
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