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Gillyflower - DON'T TAKE ALL THIS SO SERIOUSLY. My making a big deal of this is mostly jest.
And you've missed the point!
Try this --
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EXT. SEASHORE - DAY
There's not a cloud in the blue sky and the wind is at a standstill. There are no people on the deserted beach, or donkeys, or any little children waving. Above is a bare hill without any houses on it...
**
There yet?
What images came to mind? Writing of all kinds is about putting images and sounds in the reader's mind - if its 'clear blue sky' you don't say 'clouds' you say 'clear blue sky'.
Think about the visuals you're using and don't give the opposite from what you intend.
There?
... signing out of this topic... forever...
Gillyflower - DON'T TAKE ALL THIS SO SERIOUSLY. My making a big deal of this is mostly jest.
And you've missed the point!
Try this --
**
EXT. SEASHORE - DAY
There's not a cloud in the blue sky and the wind is at a standstill. There are no people on the deserted beach, or donkeys, or any little children waving. Above is a bare hill without any houses on it...
**
There yet?
What images came to mind? Writing of all kinds is about putting images and sounds in the reader's mind - if its 'clear blue sky' you don't say 'clouds' you say 'clear blue sky'.
Think about the visuals you're using and don't give the opposite from what you intend.
There?
... signing out of this topic... forever...
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