Anyone read it?
https://www.cowritescript.com/page.php?pn=the_story
I can't say I'm too impressed with the second ten pages. Not the direction I would have taken this story at all (but I can't complain because I didn't submit anything this time around).
Some might think having the masked spy be Walters' ex-wife is clever, but I think it's stupid. As David St. Hubbins said, "It's such a fine line between stupid, and clever."
IMHO, the story needs more humor. A movie like True Lies combined action and humor...and though I haven't seen that in 15 years, I remember quite liking it at the time.
MT
https://www.cowritescript.com/page.php?pn=the_story
I can't say I'm too impressed with the second ten pages. Not the direction I would have taken this story at all (but I can't complain because I didn't submit anything this time around).
Some might think having the masked spy be Walters' ex-wife is clever, but I think it's stupid. As David St. Hubbins said, "It's such a fine line between stupid, and clever."
IMHO, the story needs more humor. A movie like True Lies combined action and humor...and though I haven't seen that in 15 years, I remember quite liking it at the time.
MT
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