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  • stainjm
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    Re: Will you consider rating my blcklst hosted script?

    Nice, congrats!

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  • folkmax
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    Just wanted to pop back in and say that The Abominable, which I posted at the top of the page, just got an 8.

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  • stainjm
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    Here's my go - just posted my script "Found on Fuji" on The Blacklist.

    Found on Fuji: A young American in Japan deals with his conflicted feelings for a visiting love interest while grappling with her mental distance and recurring illness.


    https://blcklst.com/members/scripts/view/10958

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  • CColoredClown
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    Folks are posting their links in hopes that an industry person reads the post and if interested, would download the script and give it a rating.

    If you're not an industry member of the BL, you won't be able to download anyone else's scripts.

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  • karthur
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    Everybody posting links to their Blacklist Scripts and asking for feedback....is it just me? I go to the link but can't download the script or look at it, so I'm seeing the logline, which was what I just read on the forum, so....I mean...what kind of feedback are people looking for? Feedback on their logline? Or can all of youse guys see their actual scripts but I, due to years of dumbassedness, cannot.

    Please unravel these mysteries for me!

    Peace Out

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  • folkmax
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    This got a 7 the last time I uploaded it and I've since revised it.

    ALTER
    https://www.blcklst.com/members/scripts/view/9696

    Adventure/Drama/Superhero

    Logline: Ben, a superhero-obsessed 11-year-old, is forced to do a month of community service after a failed attempt at vigilantism runs him afoul of the law. But when he strikes up an unlikely friendship with a contentious drunk, little does he know that the old man is hiding a big secret - his real identity as a retired superhero.

    Also just uploaded this script:

    THE ABOMINABLE
    https://www.blcklst.com/members/scripts/view/10676

    Horror

    Logline: In 1951 after the first footprint photographs of the fabled Yeti are taken, an obsessive naturalist travels to Mount Everest to find the creature and make one last discovery.
    Last edited by folkmax; 08-28-2013, 05:54 PM. Reason: Typo

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  • pabloamigo
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    Some nice 'traction' there Will - good luck with it.

    The wait for my second paid read is killing me!

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  • happywash
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    Hi, everyone. Long time reader, newbie poster.

    I'll throw my hat in the ring:

    SECOND PLACE HERO

    Action/Adventure/Comedy

    Logline: A bipolar theater geek heads to school and gets thrust into a role he never expected to play: a real-life hero who must stop a band of goons from kidnapping a fellow classmate.

    I've pitched this as "Imagine if John Hughes wrote Die Hard..."

    https://blcklst.com/members/scripts/view/9632

    It's a 2013 Nicholl Semifinalist, and my BL evaluation got me an 8 overall, an 8 for character and dialogue, and a 9 for plot. (When it made the Monday email, I received 29 views, 13 downloads, and an email from an interested party, so... woo-hoo Black List!).

    The reader called Second Place Hero "evocative of early Shane Black: pitch black comedy and high-octane action" and "This is a blockbuster tale with an indie heart... What plot holes it has are easy to cover up, but even in its current state, this deserves to be seen."

    The full evaluation is up on the site. I have revised the script to address some of the "weaknesses" mentioned in the evaluation and have uploaded it.

    Thank you for your time and consideration,

    Will
    Last edited by happywash; 08-28-2013, 10:29 AM. Reason: Added the Nicholl Semifinalist bit (I just found out at 2:20pm)

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  • karthur
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    OK, try this on.

    https://blcklst.com/members/scripts/view/10737

    ROAD RAGE YOUR FACE

    A trainer in Non-Violence has to get violent when he teams up with a Lord of the Rings fan club and goes on a quest to find his grandfather's legendary Alaskan gold hoard.

    Comedy / Action
    Last edited by karthur; 08-27-2013, 11:58 AM. Reason: Forgot two words

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  • mlongton
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    OK - I'll throw one on the pile:

    LOOKING FOR THE PONY - comedy/drama

    She's lost in a horrific past - he's lost on Wilshire Boulevard. She can lead him home, but can the bumbling TV detective avenge her before dementia claims him?

    Any attention appreciated!

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  • pabloamigo
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    Originally posted by esporter View Post
    Okay, my script just got hammered with its first rating. I think it's better than the score it received (shocking, I know), but I did make some changes and I'd be incredibly grateful to anyone who's willing to give it a shot.

    CROSSFIRE
    action/thriller

    "A thief discovers a mysterious girl in the trunk of a stolen car and must help her escape from a relentless pursuer who wants her dead."

    Previous reader did point out that the script features an engaging protagonist and an edgy, complex villain.

    https://www.blcklst.com/members/scripts/view/9654

    Thanks!
    @esporter

    Read this last weekend. On the whole I thought it was pretty good. A couple of the violent scenes were a little OTT (took me out of the read a little) but understand you need those 'standout' moments.

    Tripp was a pretty engaging character too. Good luck with it.

    edit - also, the log is a little misleading, but again, can understand why you've gone with it.

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  • NewBabyProd
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    Re: H.G. Wells' The Chronic Argonuats

    Our screenplay for H.G. Wells' The Chronic Argonauts is back on The Black List with a new draft.

    Logline: Adapted from the FIRST time-travel adventure! An eccentric scientist searching for his own 'golden age' and a grieving preacher form an unlikely pair on a time-travel adventure that takes them from the 1880s into a dystopian future.

    https://blcklst.com/members/scripts/view/10438

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  • AE35-Unit
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    Just uploaded my new one.

    THE 24 HOUR NIGHT

    LOGLINE: A Native American physicist, part of a classified team of scientists on call to respond to extraterrestrial contact, races against time to find the answers of why our world is plunged into total darkness for twenty-four hours.


    https://blcklst.com/members/scripts/view/10674
    Last edited by AE35-Unit; 08-28-2013, 12:56 PM.

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  • LRic54
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    Hi all, posted a new one. Waiting for reviews...
    THE REBBE AND THE GERMAN
    Based on a true story--- In 1939 Poland a half- Jewish German Army intelligence officer leads a secret mission to find the Lubavitcher Rebbe and bring him to safety as the SS pursues both of them.
    https://www.blcklst.com/members/scripts/view/9322

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  • duse
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    Recently uploaded my first script to TBL, so have yet to receive a rating.

    But I discovered this Thread, thought it was kind of cool, and thought I'd jump on the bandwagon.

    Any views, ratings, and whatnot -- whatever that may be -- would be appreciated.

    Ergo ...

    WEST THIRD

    https://blcklst.com/members/scripts/view/10457
    Dramatic Comedy, Family Drama

    Log Line: After the sudden death of her brother, a woman begins to question her own life as she untangles the secrets of who he was and who he loved.

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