Hey Everyone,
I used to frequent DD years back. I'm a WGA screenwriter and director with two produced features. My independent film In Memorium was just named #22 of August's top 50 movie titles on Amazon Video Direct.
http://variety.com/2016/digital/news...ers-1201878900
I know there are some amazing and trusted feedback services on this board.
I wanted to throw my hat into the ring and offer feature script feedback, this and next week, for as many people as I can accommodate.
I'm giving an introductory rate of $100 for a script under 110 pgs (standard format.) This includes detailed page notes throughout the entire body of the script and a separate script analysis with suggestions on structure, character, theme, world, tone, logic (or any combination thereof that I think will benefit from improvement.)
This won't be full or standard coverage with synopsis/loglines and I won't be proofreading (unless a typo pops out.) Expect, at minimum, a full page of practical, targeted story/character feedback, which I have a ton of experience attacking.
Because I've had two produced scripts, both of which I directed and one of which I produced, I can also be helpful on the logistical front: If you're a filmmaker looking for broad budgetary or logistical suggestions to minimize costs (with respect to set-pieces, world, etc) or if you're a writer looking to pare down a 120 page script, let me know and I'll direct/notate my thoughts accordingly.
As a writer, I totally understand the financial challenges of paying for feedback, so I want you to be certain that I'm a fit for you. I specialize in thriller, elevated horror, sci-fi, and action with grounded characters. I write both big-world visual scripts, and conversely, I'm extremely experienced at contained/micro-budget features.
So… if you've written a comedy feature, while I can give you extensive notes on structure, character, theme, world, etc -- it's not my primary genre from a tonal perspective and there may be someone else more suited to offer you feedback. Likewise, if you've written a TV spec, I can give you strong notes on character, tone and execution, but I'm not equally versed in the macro/micro arcs from TV pilot through series.
My IMDB page: http://www.imdb.com/name/nm1206881
My films on Amazon:
www.amazon.com/dp/B01IWN3V4I
www.amazon.com/dp/B002DVPJKK
If you're interested, PM me with: your page count (if your script is longer than 110 pgs, the price will increase by $1 per page. I'm not giving notes on shorts now, but that may change,) your email, and whether there's anything specific you'd like me to target or if you just want an overall analysis. I'll email you my release form, estimated start date, estimated turnaround time (1-2 days from the start date,) and Paypal purchase link.
I have no idea what the interest level will be, but I wanted to start with an affordable rate. If this works out with my time/availability, and if people are happy with the results, I'll adjust prices accordingly.
Thanks so much for your time and all the best with your projects.
Sincerely,
Amanda
I used to frequent DD years back. I'm a WGA screenwriter and director with two produced features. My independent film In Memorium was just named #22 of August's top 50 movie titles on Amazon Video Direct.
http://variety.com/2016/digital/news...ers-1201878900
I know there are some amazing and trusted feedback services on this board.
I wanted to throw my hat into the ring and offer feature script feedback, this and next week, for as many people as I can accommodate.
I'm giving an introductory rate of $100 for a script under 110 pgs (standard format.) This includes detailed page notes throughout the entire body of the script and a separate script analysis with suggestions on structure, character, theme, world, tone, logic (or any combination thereof that I think will benefit from improvement.)
This won't be full or standard coverage with synopsis/loglines and I won't be proofreading (unless a typo pops out.) Expect, at minimum, a full page of practical, targeted story/character feedback, which I have a ton of experience attacking.
Because I've had two produced scripts, both of which I directed and one of which I produced, I can also be helpful on the logistical front: If you're a filmmaker looking for broad budgetary or logistical suggestions to minimize costs (with respect to set-pieces, world, etc) or if you're a writer looking to pare down a 120 page script, let me know and I'll direct/notate my thoughts accordingly.
As a writer, I totally understand the financial challenges of paying for feedback, so I want you to be certain that I'm a fit for you. I specialize in thriller, elevated horror, sci-fi, and action with grounded characters. I write both big-world visual scripts, and conversely, I'm extremely experienced at contained/micro-budget features.
So… if you've written a comedy feature, while I can give you extensive notes on structure, character, theme, world, etc -- it's not my primary genre from a tonal perspective and there may be someone else more suited to offer you feedback. Likewise, if you've written a TV spec, I can give you strong notes on character, tone and execution, but I'm not equally versed in the macro/micro arcs from TV pilot through series.
My IMDB page: http://www.imdb.com/name/nm1206881
My films on Amazon:
www.amazon.com/dp/B01IWN3V4I
www.amazon.com/dp/B002DVPJKK
If you're interested, PM me with: your page count (if your script is longer than 110 pgs, the price will increase by $1 per page. I'm not giving notes on shorts now, but that may change,) your email, and whether there's anything specific you'd like me to target or if you just want an overall analysis. I'll email you my release form, estimated start date, estimated turnaround time (1-2 days from the start date,) and Paypal purchase link.
I have no idea what the interest level will be, but I wanted to start with an affordable rate. If this works out with my time/availability, and if people are happy with the results, I'll adjust prices accordingly.
Thanks so much for your time and all the best with your projects.
Sincerely,
Amanda
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