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  • Worst. Honeymoon. Ever.

    Sorry to say I just thought this was really stupid and obnoxious right from the first slug:

    INT. WHO THE **** KNOWS

    But maybe it's just me.

    Anyone else read this one?

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    Everyone is jacking our style!

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    • #3
      Re: Worst. Honeymoon. Ever.

      Originally posted by BattleDolphinZero View Post
      Everyone is jacking our style!
      Robotard is the new Shane Black.
      Chicks Who Script podcast

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      • #4
        Re: Worst. Honeymoon. Ever.

        Hey I did that on THE **** IT LIST.
        http://www.pjmcilvaine.com/

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        • #5
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          Yeah -- I mean, it wasn't just because of the slugs but also the characters, the dialogue, the story, etc... I know there were a lot people who liked this one, too.

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          • #6
            Re: Worst. Honeymoon. Ever.

            Originally posted by grumpywriter View Post
            Sorry to say I just thought this was really stupid and obnoxious right from the first slug:

            INT. WHO THE **** KNOWS

            But maybe it's just me.

            Anyone else read this one?
            Yes. Complete opposite reaction. Loved it.

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            • #7
              Re: Worst. Honeymoon. Ever.

              Can anyone give a few details on the plot? Just curious about the general set up and what the couple has to go through.
              Twitter: @jboffer

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              • #8
                Re: Worst. Honeymoon. Ever.

                Originally posted by jboffer View Post
                Can anyone give a few details on the plot? Just curious about the general set up and what the couple has to go through.

                Not totally certain because I only made it to page 5, but I think it's about a couple on their honeymoon (okay -- that much I'm SURE of) and the guy discovers that his new wife is some kind of secret agent. Hijinks ensue...

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                • #9
                  Re: Worst. Honeymoon. Ever.

                  Guy discovers his wife is a super spy, pretty much. I actually liked it, but I'm a fan of Duffield's style. Although I live in fear of all the amateur writers that use it as an example and don't do it half as well.
                  @ZOlkewicz - Don't follow me on Twitter.

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                  • #10
                    Re: Worst. Honeymoon. Ever.

                    Originally posted by BattleDolphinZero View Post
                    Everyone is jacking our style!
                    I've been styling my own jacking for quite some time, thank you very much.

                    Midnite

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                    • #11
                      Re: Worst. Honeymoon. Ever.

                      Sorry....

                      A more appropriate response would have been to quote a magazine editor(don't remember the name) who, passing by the infamous Algonquin Round Table, told his compatriot:

                      "There sits the most talented bunch of unpublishable writers ever assembled."

                      midnite

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